Grammar - Microsoft Word - Beta - Study :D I think your english is good. As long as I do understand your fics is fine for me if your grammar do not as good as others.
About critics, I'm not sure if I should say it or not cuz the last time you got critics you became all sad and mellow and so on. But you said that you won't be sad, that's why I'll tell you what I think. - Please write fanfic with less-girly Tatchan? - I know it's up to you since you're the writer but when I read your fanfics I always felt guilty toward Tatchan. He's not that girly you know. But thanks god you didn't write FEMALE!Tatchan cuz I don't have a thing with Fem!Tatchan lol Childish, cute and so on are okay but girly is a no no no. Yup, just that!
Please don't get offended by my comment. I just do what you want me to do. That's all. Thanks for taking constructive criticism. :D
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I think your english is good. As long as I do understand your fics is fine for me if your grammar do not as good as others.
About critics, I'm not sure if I should say it or not cuz the last time you got critics you became all sad and mellow and so on.
But you said that you won't be sad, that's why I'll tell you what I think.
- Please write fanfic with less-girly Tatchan? -
I know it's up to you since you're the writer but when I read your fanfics I always felt guilty toward Tatchan. He's not that girly you know. But thanks god you didn't write FEMALE!Tatchan cuz I don't have a thing with Fem!Tatchan lol
Childish, cute and so on are okay but girly is a no no no.
Yup, just that!
Please don't get offended by my comment.
I just do what you want me to do.
That's all.
Thanks for taking constructive criticism. :D