honey, ur fics are great n u earned my respect through reading it. but if u ask for grammar help, i'll be telling u the key point is; read, read and read...

honestly my dear fellow friend of ryo-fan, language is a discipline. the more u use, the more u get... n the only way to use the language more is to read, listen n speak... there is no quick way to gain better english in regards to that, honey... so, GANBARE~!!

i'll be looking forward to ur improvements~ ;)