♥ JE concrit meme, ♥ meme, ♥ my drawings part 2 and ♥ follow me in tumbrl ^^

Hai, minna ^^

It's the first time I do a concrit meme XD
Please tell me your thought and advice for my writing because i do want to improve my writing ^^
*HUGS*
So please go here :( JE CONCRIT MEME )

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and let's continue to the meme that I get from Peri-chan bellemelody

Create a new post, copy and paste this message, delete my answers and type in yours.
Then tag all your good friends and family INCLUDING the person who tagged you.
The theory is that you will learn one new thing about each of your friends.
For those who are being tagged want to do this, you are welcomed to do it if u're
FREE.

( the meme ^^ )

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and this is my drawing part 2 ^^

I drew them a long time ago (in my middle high school) so the paper is a bit torn and dirty T^T
But I hope you like them ^^

 

( my drawings part 2 )

and follow me in tumbrl ne ^^ : http://cichanqu.tumblr.com/

Thank you XD