Please tell me

[citraryo]

Minna, please tell me how to improve my english and make me understand my mistake in my writing. I really need your help because i am not so good in english and i do want to write fic with a good grammar.

99,99% of you who joined in my fic comm told me that the bad thing in my writing is my bad grammar. T.T i am so sorry for making you read my fics that have so many grammar mistake *cries*

that's why please help me, ne. The 1st time i realized how bad my grammar is when people talked about it in one of jeauthormeme. I was shock and so sad, but then i realized they didn't want to hurt me. I think they cared about me and wanted me to be better in writing with making me notice where my mistakes are.

Minna, let's be honest with me, ne. Tell me what you want to say to me. I am not a perfect person/author so i know you do have a feeling to say about what you hate/ what you don't like/ what you want/ what your suggestion/ what you think or what you love about my writing maybe?

Please tell me everything here. You can critic me also. I won't be angry or sad. I promise. We are friends so i believe we want the best for all of us ^^

thank you minna. Love you so much! *hugs*

Comments

[honeydoojanse.livejournal.com]

hi :)
If you need any help, jus ask (^_^)
My english is not perfect, but I love your fics and am always willing to help!

Hugs & Smiles

Rina

[tacchan-hime.livejournal.com]

Grammar
- Microsoft Word
- Beta
- Study :D
I think your english is good. As long as I do understand your fics is fine for me if your grammar do not as good as others.

About critics, I'm not sure if I should say it or not cuz the last time you got critics you became all sad and mellow and so on.
But you said that you won't be sad, that's why I'll tell you what I think.
- Please write fanfic with less-girly Tatchan? -
I know it's up to you since you're the writer but when I read your fanfics I always felt guilty toward Tatchan. He's not that girly you know. But thanks god you didn't write FEMALE!Tatchan cuz I don't have a thing with Fem!Tatchan lol
Childish, cute and so on are okay but girly is a no no no.
Yup, just that!

Please don't get offended by my comment.
I just do what you want me to do.
That's all.
Thanks for taking constructive criticism. :D

[pamelaxiah.livejournal.com]

i usually learn to iproved it with watch mivie with subtitle in english...
also read a fanfic with english can improved your grammar..
for how to make sentence,you must learn it...

[trifarashi.livejournal.com]

ermmm...
at least ur english is better than me...
huhuhu... =)


u can get help from other people to beta it...
or a lot of reading...
that what i do...
since my vocabulary is kinda weak...
^_^

[aterjsa.livejournal.com]

I guess you can ask someone to be your BETA...

Well, I just noticed other authors here in LJ have someone to be their BETA...

I'm out of the question though, my grammar skills aren't really the best....

I think some authors or members or fans are quite good in BETA-ing...

You can ask other authors here in LJ who are good in BETA in stuff....i bet a lot would know...

^_________^

[granity20.livejournal.com]

citra-chan hisashiburi!!!

if you want to do things with your own hands you can always use microsoft..it helps a lot.
can help you check your spelling, grammars and such but you can't always be certain that what they are saying as incorrect is totally wrong when in fact you are the one who is correct and not their suggestion....

or you can always ask help from others in doing beta.....

[chou7.livejournal.com]

well, of course there are mistakes, but I see a few good points of it. I see that u are careful with third person (she and u add s :) )
I think you should read something in English... book would be best. Then you'll remember few things, just. and just be careful of using a good form of words: from your post above. I think it's critisize not critic :)

[kitsune-hikaru.livejournal.com]

honey, ur fics are great n u earned my respect through reading it. but if u ask for grammar help, i'll be telling u the key point is; read, read and read...

honestly my dear fellow friend of ryo-fan, language is a discipline. the more u use, the more u get... n the only way to use the language more is to read, listen n speak... there is no quick way to gain better english in regards to that, honey... so, GANBARE~!!

i'll be looking forward to ur improvements~ ;)

[pautami.livejournal.com]

I think as long as you get your message across, that's good enough. Nobody's perfect anyways. But if you use the language more often (not only in writing but also in speaking) you will get better at it. Reading also helps a lot. Don't be disheartened by the negative comments. There are more people who loves what you do though they may not say it out loud. (I think that includes me? *blush*) If you need help just ask. I'd be happy to edit your work for you. =)

[yunjae20akame87.livejournal.com]

i have not a good english.
i can't really to help you !!
sorry sorry.
and i don't see to your grammar's fault !!